AQA June 2018 Paper 2 Essay 1

An editable answer to this question by Peter Cramp’s wonderful former student Ella along with Peter’s examiner commentary.

Ella scored 76/80 for Paper 1 when she took the exam in 2017.  Peter taught her for Economics and Politics and in the four units for which he prepared her, she dropped only four marks in total! Peter vouches for the quality of Ella’s answers, which all score full marks or very close to it, and they are accompanied by his comments which explain their many strengths and offer suggestions for how they could be  improved even further.